release notes: implement suggestions

Report by Michael Paquier
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Bruce Momjian 2015-06-11 11:11:43 -04:00
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<para>
The remote snapshot must have been exported by
<function>pg_export_snapshot()</> or been defined as a
logical replication slot. This can be used by parallel
<function>pg_export_snapshot()</> or been defined when creating
a logical replication slot. This can be used by parallel
<application>pg_dump</> to use a consistent snapshot across
<application>pg_dump</> processes.
</para>
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</para>
<para>
This allows external tools to more easily process <acronym>WAL</>
files.
This allows external tools to more easily track what blocks
are modified.
</para>
</listitem>
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<listitem>
<para>
Add icons to all <productname>MSVC</>-built binaries (Noah Misch)
Add icons to all <productname>MSVC</>-built binaries and version
information to all <systemitem class="osname">MS Windows</>
binaries (Noah Misch)
</para>
<para>