diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml index c4bc3163f1..d4817acdee 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml @@ -1501,8 +1501,8 @@ <para> The remote snapshot must have been exported by - <function>pg_export_snapshot()</> or been defined as a - logical replication slot. This can be used by parallel + <function>pg_export_snapshot()</> or been defined when creating + a logical replication slot. This can be used by parallel <application>pg_dump</> to use a consistent snapshot across <application>pg_dump</> processes. </para> @@ -1617,8 +1617,8 @@ </para> <para> - This allows external tools to more easily process <acronym>WAL</> - files. + This allows external tools to more easily track what blocks + are modified. </para> </listitem> @@ -1754,7 +1754,9 @@ <listitem> <para> - Add icons to all <productname>MSVC</>-built binaries (Noah Misch) + Add icons to all <productname>MSVC</>-built binaries and version + information to all <systemitem class="osname">MS Windows</> + binaries (Noah Misch) </para> <para>