doc: PG 16 relnotes, wording adjustments

Reported-by: Erik Rijkers

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/c4a88acf-ab1a-a912-d4a9-5e19b323c5ed@xs4all.nl
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Bruce Momjian 2023-05-24 12:18:43 -04:00
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Allow logical replication from standbys servers
Allow logical replication from standby servers
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@ -126,11 +126,11 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
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Change REINDEX DATABASE and reindexedb to not process indexes on system catalogs (Simon Riggs)
Change REINDEX DATABASE and reindexdb to not process indexes on system catalogs (Simon Riggs)
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Processing such indexes is still possible using REINDEX SYSTEM and reindexedb --system.
Processing such indexes is still possible using REINDEX SYSTEM and reindexdb --system.
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@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ Create subscription statistics entries at subscription creation time so stats_re
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Previously entries were created only created when the first statistics were reported.
Previously entries were created only when the first statistics were reported.
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@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ Simplify permissions for LOCK TABLE (Jeff Davis)
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Previously the ability to perform LOCK TABLE at various lock levels was bound to specific query-type permissions. For example, UPDATE could could perform all lock levels except ACCESS SHARE, which
Previously the ability to perform LOCK TABLE at various lock levels was bound to specific query-type permissions. For example, UPDATE could perform all lock levels except ACCESS SHARE, which
required SELECT permissions. Now UPDATE can issue all lock levels. MORE?
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@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ Restrict the privileges of CREATEROLE roles (Robert Haas)
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Previously roles with CREATEROLE privileges could change many aspects of any non-superuser role. Such changes, including adding members, are now require the role requesting the change to have ADMIN OPTION
Previously roles with CREATEROLE privileges could change many aspects of any non-superuser role. Such changes, including adding members, now require the role requesting the change to have ADMIN OPTION
permission.
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@ -946,7 +946,7 @@ Add dependency tracking of grantors for GRANT records (Robert Haas)
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This will guarantee that pg_auth_members.grantor values is always valid.
This guarantees that pg_auth_members.grantor values are always valid.
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@ -3017,7 +3017,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
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Allow required extensions to marked as non-relocatable using "no_relocate" (Regina Obe)
Allow required extensions to be marked as non-relocatable using "no_relocate" (Regina Obe)
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