Update document date.
Periods at ends of sentences.
Don't hyphenate NetBSD (for .ps versions)
Avoid wording that implies the current release is 1.5.
Emdashes are \(em and not -- and especially not '-'; no surrounding whitespace
bound checking => bounds checking
Grammar (including parallelism, articles, etc.)
Tagged lists spaced from largest tag.
Semicolons for list delimitters where commas are ambiguous.
Colons after text before examples.
s/1.4 or later/1.4 or prior/
Simon Burge is a pmax portmaster now
Havard Eidnes -> H\(oavard Eidnes
Jaromir Dolecek -> Jarom\('ir Dolecek [can we do better?]
note The End
* mention additional kernels in binary/kernel/ dir: GENERIC_LAPTOP, etc
* note that we also include firewall software (besides X, ...)
* don't Xref the BUGS file, as it's gone
* update some file sizes (source .tgz files) to match BETA2
* mention that syssrc contains the source for all architectures
* Sysinst now allows setting root password and timezone - note that.
* Explain how to actually install binary packages, giving some
examples that people may want to install.
* Mention rawrite32 near rawrite.
* Don't show preparation of install tape on i386
* update i386 hardware a bit. This needs to be generated automatically...
* Many minor nits & typos.
- document rc.d in `compatability issues with previous releases' section
- wrap .Dl blocks with .Pp
- use .Ul, .Pa, .Tn, .Bx, ...
- use .Pp after .Ss (since .Ss2 does this, and it looks slightly better)
- add tv@ to releng
- define string `A' to contain the arch name (defaults to the port
name)
- define registers \*A and _\*A if
- deprecate _FOR_RELEASE, and just use FOR_RELEASE
- optimize suggested commands (e.g, tar usage, ...)
- consistently use `@netbsd.org' in email addresses
- remember to thank the people who host the WWW, GNATS, CVS and CVSweb servers
- add blurb about trademark ownership
- update MACHINE_LIST for the 31 ports we support (as of 1.5)
- define registers for MACHINE_ARCH, depending upon \*M; may set one
of the following as appropriate: _m68k, _mips, _powerpc, _sh3
- change to using various new macros added in ../common/macros
dillo