define what "boot media" and "distribution media" mean
macppc/install:
corrected the text in example of booting system
corrected partition number to use in example of booting from HFS partition
added example of how to use MacOS X to print partition table using pdisk
macppc/prep:
actually drive setup 1.8.1 (ships with MacOS 9.0) works too
actually describe what netbsd.ram.gz is (installation kernel)
common/postinstall:
macppc uses vt100 for console, not vt220
describe how to mount root filesystem to edit /etc/rc.conf
order of recommendations for installation methods.
macppc/hardware:
update list of unsupported models
macppc/prep:
mention that ofwboot.elf is obsoleted, and all users should be using
ofwboot.xcf instead
link to partitioning HOW-TO on website
added some info on the "official" NetBSD/macppc-1.5.1 CD-R image
added some info on cdrecord
added note that netboot must be from on-board ethernet
macppc/install:
added a few more details to some of the open firmware error messages
reordered error messages to be in order user might encounter them
removed "pciide0:0:0: lost interrupt" since this is fixed in 1.5.1
added "TFTP timeout" and explanation to list of possible problems
point to macppc X11R6 HOW-TO
common/postinstall:
point to macppc X11R6 HOW-TO
common/xfer:
recommend waiting until later to create media for distribution sets
common/sysinst:
control-C to stop sysint, but added that you can re-run it from the
command prompt, no need to reboot.
added an example of what the sysinst main menu looks like
I've organized the topics by Open Firmware version, since many users found
the old scheme way too confusing (clause out Open Firmware version-specific
content).
It's still really confusing to read (particularly the .txt version which
doesn't adequately distinguish headings from the body)
Also added a bit more info on partitioning vs. OF version.
capitalize X Window System
kill gratuitous newline
periods after sentences.
s/Domain Name Service/the Domain Name System/
s/new install system/current install system/
Be consistent and say 'ip address' not 'ip number'
Grammar (comma)
s/GMT/UTC/
Update document date.
Periods at ends of sentences.
Don't hyphenate NetBSD (for .ps versions)
Avoid wording that implies the current release is 1.5.
Emdashes are \(em and not -- and especially not '-'; no surrounding whitespace
bound checking => bounds checking
Grammar (including parallelism, articles, etc.)
Tagged lists spaced from largest tag.
Semicolons for list delimitters where commas are ambiguous.
Colons after text before examples.
s/1.4 or later/1.4 or prior/
Simon Burge is a pmax portmaster now
Havard Eidnes -> H\(oavard Eidnes
Jaromir Dolecek -> Jarom\('ir Dolecek [can we do better?]
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