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share/man/man4/hpqlb.4

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-.\" $NetBSD: hpqlb.4,v 1.3 2008/05/18 22:13:26 cegger Exp $
+.\" $NetBSD: hpqlb.4,v 1.4 2008/05/19 07:53:22 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2008 Christoph Egger <cegger@netbsd.org>
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 .\" ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd May 01, 2008
+.Dd May 18, 2008
 .Dt HPQLB 4
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
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 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 .Cd "hpqlb*    at acpi?"
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
-The
+Many
 .Tn HP
-notebook computers come with hotkeys supported by this driver.
-These hotkeys generate keycodes apart some of them.
+notebook computers come with hotkeys.
 The
 .Nm
-driver provides support all hotkeys generating keycodes including the
-those on the HP Remote control device.
+driver provides support for all hotkeys generating keycodes.
 .Pp
 The following hotkeys which do not generate keycodes are:
 .Pp
@@ -52,7 +50,6 @@ Brightness Up
 .It
 Brightness Down
 .El
-.Pp
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr acpi 4
 .Sh HISTORY
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 appeared in
 .Nx 5.0 .
 .Sh AUTHORS
-This driver was written for NetBSD by Christoph Egger.
+This driver was written for
+.Nx
+by
+.An Christoph Egger .