Various English usage, spelling and markup fixes for envstat(4)-related

things, from Snader_LB.
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4 changed files with 31 additions and 26 deletions

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.\" $NetBSD: envsys.4,v 1.48 2010/03/14 14:47:03 pgoyette Exp $
.\" $NetBSD: envsys.4,v 1.49 2012/02/09 18:10:26 riz Exp $
.\"
.\" Copyright (c) 2007 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
.\" All rights reserved.
@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ the userland part, to receive the current sensor data and
to set some properties on sensors:
.Xr envstat 8 .
.It
The kernel part that is able to talk to the drivers providing sensor
The kernel part that is able to talk to the devices providing sensor
data:
.Xr sysmon_envsys 9 .
.El
@ -209,12 +209,12 @@ Used to monitor possible over-charging of batteries.
.It Fa min-value
Current min value in the sensor.
.It Fa monitoring-state-critical
If true, the driver has enabled the flag to monitor a critical state.
If true, the device has enabled the flag to monitor a critical state.
.It Fa monitoring-state-hw-range-limits
If true, the driver has enabled the flag to monitor warning or critical
If true, the device has enabled the flag to monitor warning or critical
limits.
.It Fa monitoring-state-state-changed
If true, the driver has enabled the flag to monitor for state changes in
If true, the device has enabled the flag to monitor for state changes in
a drive or Battery state sensor.
.It Fa monitoring-supported
If true, critical/warning capacity/max/min limits may be set by the
@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ This
is used to remove all properties that are currently set via the
.Dv ENVSYS_SETDICTIONARY
ioctl.
The values will be set to defaults, the ones that the driver uses.
The values will be set to defaults, the ones that the device uses.
.Pp
Only one object is allowed on this dictionary:
.Bd -literal -offset ident
@ -429,6 +429,7 @@ main(void)
}
.Ed
.Sh SEE ALSO
.Xr envsys.conf 5 ,
.Xr envstat 8 ,
.Xr powerd 8 ,
.Xr sysmon_envsys 9

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.\" $NetBSD: envstat.8,v 1.60 2011/06/07 17:47:24 wiz Exp $
.\" $NetBSD: envstat.8,v 1.61 2012/02/09 18:10:26 riz Exp $
.\"
.\" Copyright (c) 2000, 2007, 2008, 2009 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
.\" All rights reserved.
@ -65,11 +65,11 @@ See the
.Xr envsys.conf 5
manual page for more information.
.It Fl D
Display the names of the drivers that were registered with
Display the names of the devices that are currently registered with
the
.Xr envsys 4
framework, one per line and some properties for the driver: refresh timeout
value, for example.
framework, one per line, along with some properties for the device
(for example, its refresh timeout value).
.It Fl d Ar device
Display only the sensors for the given
.Ar device .
@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ you want to only see results from a specific device.
Display temperature values in degrees Fahrenheit.
The default is to display temperature values in degrees Celsius.
.It Fl I
This flag skips the sensors with invalid state, these are normally
This flag skips the sensors with invalid state; these are normally
shown using the
.Qq N/A
string by default.
@ -110,12 +110,13 @@ row mode; this mode is now the default.
This flag is used to restore defaults to all devices registered with
the framework.
This will remove all properties that were set in
the configuration file to the setting that the drivers use by
the configuration file to the setting that the devices use by
default.
.It Fl s Ar "device:sensor,..."
Restrict the display to the named sensors.
Restrict the display to the named devices and sensors.
The pair device and sensor description must be supplied as a comma separated list.
Device as well as sensor descriptions are case sensitive.
Note that the order of the arguments given does not influence the order of output.
.It Fl T
Create and display max, min and average statistics for a sensor.
Must be used with an
@ -134,9 +135,9 @@ The default is the length of the longest sensor name.
This option has no effect.
It is retained for historical reasons.
.It Fl x
Shows the property list used by the
Shows the raw XML property list used by the
.Xr sysmon_envsys 9
framework that contains details about all registered drivers
framework that contains details about all registered devices
and sensors.
.El
.Sh UNITS
@ -169,18 +170,18 @@ Watt-hours
.Sh EXAMPLES
To display the
.Dq charge
sensor of the driver
sensor of the device
.Ar acpibat0
in one line every ten seconds:
.Pp
.Dl $ envstat -s \*qacpibat0:charge\*q -i 10
.Pp
To list the drivers that are currently registered with
To list the devices that are currently registered with
.Xr envsys 4 :
.Pp
.Dl $ envstat -D
.Pp
To display the sensors of the driver
To display the sensors of the device
.Ar aibs0 :
.Pp
.Dl $ envstat -d aibs0

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/* $NetBSD: envstat.c,v 1.89 2011/12/04 19:34:22 jmcneill Exp $ */
/* $NetBSD: envstat.c,v 1.90 2012/02/09 18:10:26 riz Exp $ */
/*-
* Copyright (c) 2007, 2008 Juan Romero Pardines.
@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
#include <sys/cdefs.h>
#ifndef lint
__RCSID("$NetBSD: envstat.c,v 1.89 2011/12/04 19:34:22 jmcneill Exp $");
__RCSID("$NetBSD: envstat.c,v 1.90 2012/02/09 18:10:26 riz Exp $");
#endif /* not lint */
#include <stdio.h>
@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ int main(int argc, char **argv)
case 'x': /* print the dictionary in raw format */
flags |= ENVSYS_XFLAG;
break;
case 'W': /* No longer used, retained for campatability */
case 'W': /* No longer used, retained for compatibility */
break;
case '?':
default:

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.\" $NetBSD: envsys.conf.5,v 1.13 2010/02/15 23:04:11 pgoyette Exp $
.\" $NetBSD: envsys.conf.5,v 1.14 2012/02/09 18:10:26 riz Exp $
.\"
.\" -
.\" Copyright (c) 2007, 2008 Juan Romero Pardines.
@ -30,7 +30,9 @@
.Os
.Sh NAME
.Nm envsys.conf
.Nd Configuration file for the envsys framework
.Nd configuration file for the
.Xr envsys 4
framework
.Sh SYNOPSIS
.Nm envstat
.Op Fl S
@ -409,10 +411,10 @@ This property is only allowed in
.Em Voltage
sensors and
.Em only
if the driver has enabled the appropriate flag for the mentioned
if the device has enabled the appropriate flag for the mentioned
sensor.
The resistor factor may be used to change the behavior
of the value returned by the driver.
of the value returned by the device.
.Pp
If a sensor supports this, the
.Em allow-rfact
@ -423,7 +425,7 @@ The following properties are available for device blocks:
.Bl -tag -width ident
.It refresh-timeout = 10s
.Pp
This property sets the refresh timeout value in a driver, and will be used
This property sets the refresh timeout value in a device, and will be used
to refresh data and check for critical conditions any time the timeout
is met.
The value may be specified in seconds, minutes or hours.
@ -447,6 +449,7 @@ Default configuration file.
.El
.Sh SEE ALSO
.Xr proplib 3 ,
.Xr envsys 4 ,
.Xr envstat 8 ,
.Xr powerd 8
.Sh HISTORY