Minor english nits.

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rumble 2006-09-06 14:59:15 +00:00
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Welcome to NetBSD! Welcome to NetBSD!
This system is running a beta release of the NetBSD operating system, aimed This system is running a beta release of the NetBSD operating system, aimed
at stabilizing the next formal release. It is close to formal release quality at stabilizing the next formal release. It is close to formal release quality,
but it may still contain bugs, even serious ones. Please bear this in mind but may still contain bugs, even serious ones. Please bear this in mind and
and use the system with care. use the system with care.
You are encouraged to test this version as thoroughly as possible. Should you You are encouraged to test this version as thoroughly as possible. Should you
encounter any problem, please report it back to the development team using the encounter any problem, please report it back to the development team using the
send-pr(1) utility (requires a working MTA). If yours is not properly set up, send-pr(1) utility (requires a working MTA). If yours is not properly set up,
use the web interface at: http://www.NetBSD.org/Misc/send-pr.html use the web interface at: http://www.NetBSD.org/Misc/send-pr.html
Thank you for testing this NetBSD release and helping us improve it. Thank you for helping us test and improve this beta NetBSD release.

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This system is running a development snapshot of the NetBSD operating system, This system is running a development snapshot of the NetBSD operating system,
also known as NetBSD-current. It is highly possible for it to contain serious also known as NetBSD-current. It is highly possible for it to contain serious
bugs, regressions, broken features and any other kind of problem. Please bear bugs, regressions, broken features or other problems. Please bear this in mind
this in mind and use the system with care. and use the system with care.
You are encouraged to test this version as thoroughly as possible. Should you You are encouraged to test this version as thoroughly as possible. Should you
encounter any problem, please report it back to the development team using the encounter any problem, please report it back to the development team using the
send-pr(1) utility (requires a working MTA). If yours is not properly set up, send-pr(1) utility (requires a working MTA). If yours is not properly set up,
use the web interface at: http://www.NetBSD.org/Misc/send-pr.html use the web interface at: http://www.NetBSD.org/Misc/send-pr.html
Thank you for testing this NetBSD version and helping us improve it. Thank you for helping us test and improve NetBSD.

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This system is running a release candidate of the NetBSD operating system, This system is running a release candidate of the NetBSD operating system,
aimed at shaking out the most serious bugs that may affect the next formal aimed at shaking out the most serious bugs that may affect the next formal
release. It is very close to formal release quality but it might still release. It should be considered close to release quality, but may still
contain incorrections that prevent considering it as such. contain unresolved issues.
You are encouraged to test this version as thoroughly as possible. Should you You are encouraged to test this version as thoroughly as possible. Should you
encounter any problem, please report it back to the development team using the encounter any problem, please report it back to the development team using the
send-pr(1) utility (requires a working MTA). If yours is not properly set up, send-pr(1) utility (requires a working MTA). If yours is not properly set up,
use the web interface at: http://www.NetBSD.org/Misc/send-pr.html use the web interface at: http://www.NetBSD.org/Misc/send-pr.html
Thank you for testing this NetBSD release and helping us improve it. Thank you for helping us test and improve this NetBSD release candidate.

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Welcome to NetBSD! Welcome to NetBSD!
This system is running a development snapshot of one of the stable branches of This system is running a development snapshot of a stable branch of the NetBSD
the NetBSD operating system. This branch will eventually lead to a new formal operating system, which will eventually lead to a new formal release. This
release, but it cannot be considered release quality at the moment. Meanwhile, snapshot may contain bugs or other unresolved issues and is not yet considered
it is possible for it to contain bugs or any other kind of problem. Please release quality. Please bear this in mind and use the system with care.
bear this in mind and use the system with care.
You are encouraged to test this version as thoroughly as possible. Should you You are encouraged to test this version as thoroughly as possible. Should you
encounter any problem, please report it back to the development team using the encounter any problem, please report it back to the development team using the
send-pr(1) utility (requires a working MTA). If yours is not properly set up, send-pr(1) utility (requires a working MTA). If yours is not properly set up,
use the web interface at: http://www.NetBSD.org/Misc/send-pr.html use the web interface at: http://www.NetBSD.org/Misc/send-pr.html
Thank you for testing this NetBSD release and helping us improve it. Thank you for helping us test and improve this NetBSD branch.